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Journey Part 53 Part 2

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Mom and I are in the bathtub, she's laying on her back in the water and I'm laying on her chest.

Mom says "This feels very nice." with a motherly smile.

I say "It sure does." with a smile and I lay my head into her.

I feel Mom wrap her front, right leg around me, I look up at her and she begins to lick the top of my head.

I lightly giggle and I say "Mom, what are you doing? This kinda tickles." with a giggley smile.

Mom says "I'm grooming your mane, the natural way." with a motherly smile.

I say "It did tickle a bit, but it felt very nice." with a warm smile.

Mom begins to groom my mane with her tounge again, it lightly tickles me but it wears off to a very warm feeling and I actually coo. I feel something being rubbed into my coat, I glance, I see soap being worked into my coat, I glance up at Mom and her horn is glowing in a dark blue arua.

Mom stops grooming my mane and she says "Your really enjoying this my son." still motherly smiling.

I say "I sure am, this feels very nice." with a smile.

Mom says "Indeed it does.", she kisses my forehead and she says "It feels beautifull, that we are mother and son." still motherly smiling.

I lay my head into her chest, I rub my head against her and I say "I could stay like this forever." with a warm smile.

I hear Mom say "So can I, but we can't my boy." with a motherly and loving tone.

I feel warm water going through my coat and through my mane. I look up at Mom, she runs water through her mane and she begins to work shampoo into it.

Mom looks like she gets an idea and she says "After this, would you like to learn how to trot?" with a curious smile.

I say "Sure, I'd like to learn that." with a smile.

Mom says "okay, I'll teach you after we're done bathing." with a motherly smile.

I say "Okay Mom." still smiling.

Mom washes her mane with water, rinsing out the shampoo, she gets me on my side, she holds me in place with her front, left leg, she uses her magic to mix soap into the areas on me and her she hasen't wash yet, she washes out the soap and she puts me back on her chest.

Mom nuzzles me very warmly and motherly and she says "Did I miss anything?" still motherly smiling.

I say "I don't think so.", I crawl up Mom's chest, I lay my head into the bottom of her neck and I say "I love you Mom." still smiling.

I feel Mom kiss the top of my head, I feel her gently lay her head ontop of mine and she says "I love you too my little foal."

I hug Mom's neck, I feel her wrap one of her legs around me and I feel her lightly rub my back. I feel my eyes getting watery, I tighten my hug and I lightly rub my head against her. I feel Mom lift her head off mine, I feel her muzzle nudging me, I look up at her and she lightly gasps.

Mom says "Are you alright my son? Why are you crying?" with a concerned look.

I say "I'm crying because I'm happy." with a smile and I feel tears leave my eyes.

Mom nuzzles me and she says "I'm happy that your happy my little one. But it hurts me to see tears coming from your eyes." still with a concerned look.

I say "I understand what you mean, but sometimes that happens when I get very happy." still smiling.

Mom kisses my forehead and she says "I've heard that does happen, it's just seeing tears in your eyes make me feel bad. But there is no shame in shedding tears." with a light smile.

I say "No there isn't." still smiling.

Mom says "Okay, time for us to dry off my colt." with a motherly smile.

Mom uses her magic to lift me into the air very gently, she gets out of the tub, she uses her magic to pull the plug out of the tubs drain, she has a towal levitate towards me, she dries me off, when she's done drying off she sets me on the toilet lid and she begins to dry herself off.

Mom says "Did you enjoy your bath?" with a curious smile as she dries her mane.

I say "I did Mom, did you?" with a curious smile.

Mom begins to dry her tail and she says "I did my little one." with a smile.

Mom finishes drying herself off, she puts the towal somewhere, she uses her magic to pick me up, she puts me on her back, we leave the bathroom, Mom uses her magic to gently place me on the soft floor and she stands to my right.

Mom says "Are you ready to learn how to trot?" with a curious smile.

I nod and I say "Yes I am." with a light smile.

Mom says "Okay my boy. To start, please try to stand." with a light smile.

I plant my front hooves on the floor, I beginto lift myself up and I manage to balance on all fours.

Mom says "Alright my foal, just follow ehat I do and don't worry if you fall, I'll catch you." with a motherly smile.

I nod and I say "Okay Mom." with a smile.

Mom moves her front, right leg forward, she moves her rear, left leg forward and she moves the other two legs the same way.

Mom says "Your turn son." still motherly smiling.

I nod and I follow what Mom showed me, taking my time. I do a few sets, with me getting better with each one.

Mom says "Nice job my boy, you did very well." with an impressed smile.

I say "Thank you." with a smile.

Mom says "Would you like to learn how to fly?" with a curious smile.

I think and I say "Sure." with a light smile.

Mom says "Okay, first try to feel your wings and unfold them."

I look at my wings, I feel the nerves in them, I try to move them, but I barely can because I'm not use to them, after a bit I unfold and spread them.

Mom says "Very good, now comes the trickey part. For now we are gonna hover in the air, as there isn't any space for flying in this room.", she faces me, she unfolds and speads her wings instantly and she says "To start hovering..."

Mom goes over her hovering instructions with movement demonstrations with her wings.

Mom begins to hover in the air with her body sort of upright and she says "Come and join me my boy." with an encouraging smile.

I begin to use my wing like how Mom showed me, I begin to hover into the air and I make it to where Mom is.

Mom says "Nice job." with a motherly smile and she kisses my forehead.

I say "Thank you." with a smile.

Mom says "Would you like to learn how to use magic?" with a curious smile.

I hear my stomic loudly growl and Mom lightly giggles.

Mom says "Actually, lets go get something to eat first. It is almost lunch time afterall." with a light smile.

I nod and I say "Sounds good to me." with a light smile.

Mom says "Give me some time to put on my dress my boy." still lightly smiling.

I descend to the floor, I land, I fold my wings and Mom does the same. Mom gets the blue dress Rarity made for her and she begins to put it on.

I smile warmly at Mom and I begin to think of how we've spent our time together from when we met up to now. My mother who is Nightmare Moon and a very loving mother to me, being we are now truely mother and son geneticaly... I was just happy that she was my adoptive mother to begin with, but now... I'm just so happy I wanna cry with warm tears and a joyous smile. I mean it, to feel her, a mother's warmth and love... it's a feeling I've missed and with her it's far stronger.

Mom finishes putting on her dress, she quickly brushes her mane, she puts on the pendant I gave her around her neck and she says "I'm all set, are you ready?" with a light smile.

I nod and I say "Yes I am." with a smile.

Mom says "Then let's head out my colt." with a motherly smile.

Mom uses her magic to put me on her back, I wrap my front hooves around Mom's neck the best I can, Mom turns her head, she nuzzles me and we leave the room.

The guard that I talked to says "Hello madam Moon.", he notices me and he says "Who are you?"

Mom says "You know him guard, he is your prince." with a light smile.

The guard looks at me with a bit of shock and he says "Sir?"

I say "Yeah, it's me." with a light nod and a light smile.

The guard says "So it did work." with a neutral look.

Mom says "You knew?"

The guard says "Yes, us guards we skeptical at first, but it did work. Though your appearence isn't what we expected."

I say "Mom did a spell to where dna mixed with mine."

The guard says "If you dont mind me asking sir. How will this effect you when you go back to your normal form?"

I say "We don't know, but when that does happen, we'll deal with it then. But your concern is welcome. Can you please spread word to all of the guards about this?"

The guard says "Yes sir."

Mom says "Just tell them he's the colt that's with me."

The guard nods and he says "Understood."

Mom says "We'll be on our way, have a nice day." and she trots away.

We make it outside, as we head into Canterlot itself, I look around and it's amazing how beautifull the buildings look and the architecture is great.

Mom says "Luna told me she gave you the grand tour, how was it seeing this city for the first time?" with a curious smile.

I say "It was great, Canterlot has alot to offer." with a light smile.

Mom nods, she says "Indeed.", she looks around and she says "It looks like not much has changed on the outside, but I know it really has over the one-thousand years I've been gone."

I say "But you'll get use to it Mom, trust me." with a light smile.

Mom says "I know I will, but thank you son." with a light smile.

I hear a whistle, I look and I see Twilight waving us over. twilight is sitting at a table, she's sitting with Shining Armor, Rarity, Pinkie Pie, their parents, along with Cadance, Sweetie Belle and three mares I haven't seen before.

I say "It looks like they want us to join them." with a light smile.

Mom says "Then lets." with a smile.

We go over to the group, the other ponies look at us and they smile.

Mom says "Good morning everypony." still smiling.

twilight says "Good morning Moon." with a smile.

Velvet looks at me and she says "Aww, who's this little guy?" with a warm smile.

Mom says "You already know who he is." with a giggley smile.

I say "It's me, Adam." with a smile.

Twilight says "Little brother? Wow, the spell did work. Your a pony!" with a big smile.

Cadance says "You look so cute as a foal." with a smile.

Pearl says "He does and I must say, he looks handsom." with a smile.

Rarity says Would the two of you like to join us?" with a curious smile.

Mom says "Sure." with a smile.

Mom uses her magic to put me next to Twilight and Mom sits to my right, next to Rarity.

Pinkie Pie looks very excited, infact she's shaking with a big smile.

I say "Are you okay Pinkie Pie?"

Pinkie Pie says "Okay? I'm great! Now I can introduce you to my three sisters!" with an excited smile.

I look at the three mares sitting between Pinkie Pie and her parents.

Pinkie Pie gets up, she says "These are my wonderfull sisters. Maud, Marble and Limestone." with her pointing them out and she sits back down, all with a big smile.

Muad has a grey coat, teal eyes and her mane and tail are are sort of a greyish-purple. Marble has a light greyish coat, purple eyes and her mane and tail are grey. Limestone has a light greyish-purple coat, goldish brown eyes and her mane and tail are light grey. Plus the three mares are wearing somekind of clothing that a blue color with a type of sash or belt at the waist area.

I say "It's nice to meet you." with a smile.

Marble says "It's nice to meet you too." with a smile.

Limestone says "Yeah, Pinkie has told us alot about you." with a smile.

Nud says "And we are very happy to meet you." with a neutral look and tone.

I sort of become confused by maud's reaction, she seems sort of like the goth kids who have no show of emotion.

Twilight says "Just to let you know little brother, Maud doesn't show it like Pinkie does or most ponies, so if she seems, well... you know. Don't take it the wrong way." with a light smile.

Maud says "It is true, I don't show my enthusiasm and such as most ponies do. I hope that wont be a problem."

I say "Don't worry Maud, it wont be." with a smile.

To be continued...
This is the 2nd part of the 53rd part of my first insertion based fanfic. Comments are always welcome(except negative ones) also if anyone has any questions, please put it in the comments below(except negative ones).

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Wow! This is great